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starchip
11-09-2002, 01:08 PM
Nina wanted some short stories so I opened this thread for people to poast short stories and add suggestions for a story for me to write:)

FaeLuna
11-09-2002, 02:23 PM
hmmm what kinds of stories do you like to write starchip?

I think it would be interesting if you wrote a story from the point of view of a pet. :)

starchip
11-09-2002, 02:45 PM
Thats a good suggestion Fae:)
hmmm.....Lets do it from the point of view of a cat that way i'll be much more interesting. what sort of owner should it have?

FaeLuna
11-09-2002, 03:14 PM
hmmmm... ok how about an owner with an interesting job of some kind? Like a detective, or movie star, or rock singer, or police man, or... just something kind of different, not an office job. :D

starchip
11-09-2002, 03:22 PM
Well that narrows it down to rock star,movie star or maby an extreame job like a international spy like james bond? your pick

FaeLuna
11-09-2002, 03:26 PM
Hey, international spy sounds like it has a lot of excitement!! I'll pick that one! :p

Helén
11-09-2002, 03:30 PM
Wow!! I'm late here i see. Yes. International spy sounds great!! :) And this is soooo sweet of you Starchip. I'm really looking forward to your first story. :classic::classic::classic:

*hops up on a chair to listen*

starchip
11-09-2002, 03:33 PM
:):):)Should the owner be really nice to the cat or because of his job he dosent pay alot of attention to the cat or maby he bought his cat a robot to look after the cat?

Helén
11-09-2002, 03:39 PM
Why not make the cat somehow he's ally... ;)

starchip
11-09-2002, 03:46 PM
Ok how about the cat goes on the missions with him and the cat should be black so he hides in the shadows and the cat is really loyal.

FaeLuna
11-09-2002, 04:07 PM
oh I love the idea of the cat being able to hide in the shadows and going on missions with him!! :D :whitekitty:

Helén
11-10-2002, 07:24 AM
Yes, Yes!!!! :laugh:

*hops up and down on her chair*

starchip
11-10-2002, 02:32 PM
What should we call the cat and its owner?

FaeLuna
11-11-2002, 02:37 AM
Hmmm I don't know about the owner, but I think it would be cool for the cat to be named something like Secret :D :whitekitty:

Helén
11-11-2002, 04:12 AM
That's a great name Fae! :classic::whitekitty:

starchip
11-11-2002, 09:00 AM
Ok:) How about mr x or something else that means secret for the owners name.

FaeLuna
11-11-2002, 01:19 PM
Mr X sounds good to me!! Will you start writing the story now?? I can't wait to read it!! :D :whitekitty:

starchip
11-12-2002, 10:19 AM
OK how about this for a 1st draft I will call the story secret stories

Mission one the steak smugglers

mr x had just opend the letter box when he found his mission plan. A group of people are smugging 50 oz steaks across the world thay are transporting steaks larger than the coustoms standards as well you cant get this much steak out of a cow in one peace so your mission is secretly entering their base located on the map provided and find out how thay are making the steaks before we assult the place with the army.

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as mr x and secret are about to enter the complex he sends secret in the air vents to deactevate the outside door (secret has a camera so mr x can gide secret) as secret shuts down the door he sees two buttons stop plastic flow and stop meat flow so thats how there doing it they are sicking meat together with plastic! As thay enter the building thay overhear the gards talking about the shipping of the meat the gard sees mr x and the activates the alarm! How will our heroes escape now!

I'll save part two for another time if you like it.

Helén
11-13-2002, 04:45 PM
Sounds real good Starchip!! :classic: Go on!!!

*hops up and down on her chair*

starchip
11-14-2002, 11:20 AM
mission one continued

as thay run mr x finds the perfect situation to use his super traquilizer shot out of his finger nail (yes he did come with some interesting gagets) but the doors have been sealed shut and the map of the compex showes that the only way to unlok it is the swich that the main leader has and the army will be coming any time soon! but the master is a floor below them (he can see them through a glass window)

I'll continue the story ending soon!

FaeLuna
11-15-2002, 06:24 PM
Hey, this is a really fun story so far!! I love the kitty having a camera and going through the air vents! :) :whitekitty:

starchip
11-17-2002, 03:19 AM
Ok this is the ending of the first story.

mr x sees a air vent that only secret can go through "okay secret its all up to you"said mr x anxiously. (mr x waits outside to tell the assault force the situation) now secret has spotted the swich just behined the leader of the group (secret decides to take a picture of the leader whith the camera she has for evidence) the escapes) then secret did a foward flip out of the air vent and fliped the swich he second the force moved in and bomed the complex secret was wounded in the explosion but after 3 weeks in the hospital secret was awarded the best agent award.
know one has found the group leader

THE END

Helén
11-17-2002, 11:10 AM
Lol!!! I liked that.. Hehe.. What a cat.. Thanks Starchip! :classic:

starchip
11-17-2002, 12:31 PM
give me a day or two I'll write the next story on if the suggestions
keep coming in for mission two:)

ManagerJosh
11-17-2002, 09:07 PM
Keep it coming StarChip....I'm having a laugh here :D

Helén
11-18-2002, 12:28 AM
Ideas for mission2? uhmm how about industrial spying?

ManagerJosh
11-18-2002, 12:46 AM
oooo!! I know.... My teacher is an Alien! :D

starchip
11-18-2002, 06:43 AM
Yes! how about an evil huge faceless company that makes really unhelthy food and the adverts use subliminal massageing so everyone buys somthing like 50 pakets a day!

*starchip stops to take a deep breath of air*

Helén
11-18-2002, 10:19 AM
Lol Starchip. I like that idea. But hey! Don't forget to breath. ;)

starchip
11-19-2002, 09:18 AM
And the cat must find a worst enemy that it fights and the enemy shall be a dog